Nice to see that you are making good progress each time you post your work online - 1. I can see that your building as been changing shape/form over the weeks and is becoming more detailed and focused to what you are trying to do - However, some of my recent comments still apply, for example - 2. You haven't shown a single dimension on your drawings and still havent confirmed the building height/width and theatre capacity - 3. I can see that you have down sized the resturant facilitites however, in comparison to your other facilities and volume of people this seems a bit small - 4. In your past floor plans you have shown/indicated a mechanical room.. where is this now as its not shown on your current floor plans? Also where is your plant room ? 5. Can you please label all your rooms so its clear what they are, it saves me guessing - 6. What are your chosen building materials? is there going to be any glazing? 7. It will be good if there is a dialogue between the two of us rather than me leaving comments and receive no reply from you -
Finally, keep going it seems you are making good progress in developing your scheme -
Hello Kyle,
ReplyDeleteNice to see that you are making good progress each time you post your work online - 1. I can see that your building as been changing shape/form over the weeks and is becoming more detailed and focused to what you are trying to do - However, some of my recent comments still apply, for example - 2. You haven't shown a single dimension on your drawings and still havent confirmed the building height/width and theatre capacity - 3. I can see that you have down sized the resturant facilitites however, in comparison to your other facilities and volume of people this seems a bit small - 4. In your past floor plans you have shown/indicated a mechanical room.. where is this now as its not shown on your current floor plans? Also where is your plant room ? 5. Can you please label all your rooms so its clear what they are, it saves me guessing - 6. What are your chosen building materials? is there going to be any glazing? 7. It will be good if there is a dialogue between the two of us rather than me leaving comments and receive no reply from you -
Finally, keep going it seems you are making good progress in developing your scheme -